Jack Bland
Positives - it looks smart with the way the text is presented
the pictures suit the surroundings not drawing too much attention but giving some information about the artist that cant be described in words
the title at the top is nicely presented
Negatives - the boarder suits this page but its presented on every page so some variation will not be frowned upon
the background is all white, i think you should use something other than white
Oli Warden
Positives - i like the title at the top it gives a nice effect
The pictures suit the rest of the page
Negatives - the boarder is used too often
the white background is used on every page
i think that some more text could of been added with different questions
Dean Ramsay
Positives - The title was the first thing i noticed which was then followed by the pictures, the eye contact in the pictures makes it look like they are talking directly to the audience.
The easy to notice questions are typed in red font which makes it easy to distinguish from the answers
negatives - There are three pictures, its like you have used one of them to fill some space that you couldnt think to put anything else there.
the way the artist speaks isnt like a typical artist, know slang or sayings that you would predict from the artist.
Lewis Atkins
Positives - The way the artist is presented in the pictures makes him look like he is talking directly to the audience
The boarder suits the page better than contents and front cover as you can see the divide.
Negative - The writing isnt in the expected slang of a artist
the title matches the mast head of the contents too much
The saying at the top doesnt make sense without reading through the article
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